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Naruto Doujin Page 1 by frostyshark Naruto Doujin Page 1 by frostyshark
Random Doujin I've been working off and on for like...a year! And it's only 12 frickin pages! (*cough*cough*procrastinator*cough*)

Anyways. Just a goofy comic that may or may not focus on the relationship of Naruto and Hinata!

Please if you read this-this is (technically) my first doujin any tips or advice is very welcomed.
(i.e. use screentones you lazy-ass!) <---I'm kidding (don't be mean, please)

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FullFORCESoldier Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, the days when they'd get D-rank missions! It feels like so long ago... *looks at year 2006 at the bottom* It WAS long ago. XP
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frostyshark Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
LOL! Yeah...old school.
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FullFORCESoldier Featured By Owner May 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
They were good times; it's just that the current events are much more epic.

Oh, thank you very much for the llama badge. ^w^
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frostyshark Featured By Owner May 23, 2011
I need to get caught up with the epic-ness! :O

no prob! ^_^
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FullFORCESoldier Featured By Owner May 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not that up to date myself either. XP
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Hungarianbeast Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe drank mission :icondrunkplz:
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hatsunegillian Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ur drawing is awesome but u got kakashi's hand wrong it should have a glove or something
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pralinkova-princezna Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am thinking about making a doujin too, I want to ask what is better, keep the traditional form from right to left or like you have it here? It is very nicely drawn, btw. :aww:
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frostyshark Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008
Thank you! ^_^ As far as Right to Left or Left to Right, I found it easier for me to do it Left to Right, but if you're more accustomed to Right to Left then, by all means, go for it!
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pralinkova-princezna Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nore natural for me is L>R but I thought about making it similar to the original manga, so R>L, also because that is the traditional manga style...
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Chou98 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
Hehe:giggle: Cutee:D
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Emelie-chan1323 Featured By Owner May 9, 2008
love your drawing style and story :D

i think this is my 3th time watching it hehe love it so much
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frostyshark Featured By Owner May 19, 2008
Thank you! XD I'm glad you like it!
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hdnlv Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2007
Love the drawings *Envy* LOL
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gaara3489 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2007
thats just like sakura
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NaruIno4ever Featured By Owner May 28, 2007
I'm not much much of a NaruHina fan, but I got the Alternate ending and the original ending form a friend of mine, and I thought I check it out. the first page is good. Can't wait to read the rest. ^^;
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frostyshark Featured By Owner May 28, 2007
It's ok if you're not a NaruHina Fan (I like both NaruSaku and NaruHina), and I don't really lay it on thick in the Doujin (until the last page ^_^) Well, I hope you enjoy it! XD
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erynotyuki Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2007
gorgeous art! Wow! I mean wow! I can't wait to read the rest of it! :+fav:ing so other people can read it too! ^.^
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RoxyRoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice job! You got the characters down pretty well. :boing:

Screen tone? I can understand for a doujnshi, but just to remind you, Misashi Kishimoto uses screentone very rarely. He usually uses single crosshatching, and when he does use screentone, it's usually to imply further perspective or some serious moment or expression. ^_^

I have a Naruto doujnshi too! Check it out. ^_-
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frostyshark Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2007
Sorry this is all late, I was camping but I'm back now!

I love how Kishimoto uses crosshatching! And I love his backgrounds!

Alright! I'll go check out your Doujin too! ^_^
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RoxyRoo Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
meep!

camping? I LOVE camping... ((It's all about the s'mores, man.))
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DianAriko Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007
wow I love how you drew naruto all exited!
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Hinata666 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
It starts really good ^^
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Hopealuoti Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
Good job :P
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green-acorn Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2006
Well, I like it! I have 32 pages in my comic so far, although its not about Naruto at all. Just some orginal characters on a work in progress story-line...yeah...

yours looks better than mine...*sobs
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Fixer444 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
That's great that's great I'm a Creator of my own comics too
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